2023年4月29日雅思大作文范文:科技讓人們有更多的休閑時(shí)光

來(lái)源：新東方在線雅思時(shí)間：2023-05-18 16:20:16

2023年4月29日雅思寫(xiě)作考試已經(jīng)結(jié)束啦，小編搜集整理了本次雅思寫(xiě)作task2：科技讓人們有更多的休閑時(shí)光范文，供雅思考生參考。

WRITING TASK 2

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

It was predicted that with the development of technology, people would have more free time in 21st century.

To what extent do you think the prediction has come true?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話題分類(lèi)】

科技類(lèi)

【題目解析】

題目大意：曾有預(yù)測(cè)說(shuō)，隨著科技的發(fā)展，人們將會(huì)在21世紀(jì)有更多的空閑時(shí)間。你認(rèn)為這個(gè)預(yù)測(cè)在多大程度上實(shí)現(xiàn)了？

【思路分析】

本題考查科技發(fā)展對(duì)于人們空閑時(shí)間的影響，與常見(jiàn)的科技類(lèi)話題有一定的關(guān)聯(lián)，但是需要關(guān)注free time的方向。科技在事實(shí)上提升了生產(chǎn)力，減少了很多生產(chǎn)活動(dòng)的時(shí)間，在數(shù)碼技術(shù)、網(wǎng)絡(luò)技術(shù)以及交通等方面的進(jìn)步也縮短了人們?nèi)粘贤ê统鲂械臅r(shí)間，生活方面也因?yàn)楦黝?lèi)方便的家用電器而節(jié)省了大量的時(shí)間。但是同時(shí)人們也發(fā)現(xiàn)，工作時(shí)間并沒(méi)有縮短，人們?nèi)匀恍枰?jīng)常性的加班，手機(jī)和通訊也使人們隨時(shí)可以被聯(lián)系到，侵占了私人的時(shí)間；機(jī)器的應(yīng)用也加劇了勞動(dòng)力市場(chǎng)的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)，使得人們必須花費(fèi)更多的時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)掌握新的技能或是做兼職工作以養(yǎng)活自己。

【寫(xiě)作思路】

開(kāi)頭段：改寫(xiě)題目，表明立場(chǎng)，雖然確實(shí)在某方面讓人們更高效，但并非增加了休閑時(shí)間。

主體第一段：說(shuō)明科技發(fā)展對(duì)于生產(chǎn)力的提升以及使人們?cè)黾恿艘恍┳杂芍涞臅r(shí)間。

主體第二段：說(shuō)明由于科技的發(fā)展并不必然會(huì)讓人們的空閑時(shí)間增加。

結(jié)尾段：強(qiáng)調(diào)個(gè)人立場(chǎng)，表明科技進(jìn)步確實(shí)提升了效率，但是對(duì)于人們時(shí)間的需求也發(fā)生了改變，人們需要更多的時(shí)間投入，并且平衡工作和個(gè)人生活在我們?nèi)祟?lèi)自己。

【參考范文】

One of the predicted benefits of technological progress in the 21st century was that people would have more free time. While there is no doubt that technology has facilitated automation of many tasks and productivity increase, it is also clear that this has not necessarily translated into more leisure time for individuals.

On the one hand, it is true that technology has revolutionized many aspects of our lives and has allowed us to complete tasks more quickly and easily. In agriculture, for example, the use of machines has dramatically increased efficiency, meaning that farmers can produce more food in less time than ever before. Similarly, the rise of the internet and digital communication tools and the improvements of transportation have enabled us to work from anywhere, reducing the amount of time we need to spend commuting to and from an office. These technological advancements have undoubtedly saved time and make us more productive.

On the other hand, the same technological advancements have also led to an increase in the demands on our time. The availability of digital devices and the internet means that we are always connected and always "on" regardless of locations and time zones. Employees are often required to be available outside of traditional working hours in sacrifice of their free time. Additionally, machines have been replacing human workers in almost every area, which has led to intense competition in the labour market. People thus have to spend more time learning and honing new skills to secure their jobs or they have to work extended hours doing part-time jobs to make ends meet.

In conclusion, while technology has undoubtedly given rise to greater efficiency and productivity in many areas of life, it has not led to more leisure time. Instead, the demands on our time have simply shifted and changed, and it is up to us as individuals to find ways to balance work and leisure time in this increasingly connected and competitive world.

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【單詞積累】

technological progress 科技進(jìn)步

facilitate 促使，促進(jìn)，使某事易于發(fā)生

automation 自動(dòng)化

translate 轉(zhuǎn)化

revolutionize 革新，改革

advancement 進(jìn)步

undoubtedly 毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)地

productivity 生產(chǎn)力

productive 富有成效的

availability 可用性，空閑